Writing challenge – Week 5

Dancing is my passion; I could never abandon it.

Today I went to my ballet class in an excited mood as I finally got to spend time with my best friend Maeve, however I wasn’t allowed to chat as we had to focus on ballet. Thirty minutes went by as I started to sweat because I worked hard in my dance lessons. After class, Maeve came to my house and at last we could spend time together and play around. We got changed for the next dancing class however after we got changed, we watched a movie. An hour passed as we drove to the dance studio. Today was my favourite lesson of the week, we had our troupe class. Finally I felt proper joy in me as I danced my heart out. We learned some new choreography and even though I felt tired, I didn’t stop dancing. Our new dance routine was about a magical scarf that interests everyone. Already I was proud of everyone working tirelessly to perfect the routine. 

After I went with Maeve to the shop “Kid’s stuff” and bought ice-cream. Then we had to part ways and say goodbye.

Rating comments

In my opinion the least helpful comments are number 1, 4, 6 and 7 and the most helpful comments are 2, 3, 5 and 8.

Why I believe that number 1, 4, 6 and 7 are unhelpful comments is because they have misspelled grammar, forgotten full stops and capital letters and they used short forms of writing which is unnecessary.

Why I believe that number 2, 3, 5 and 8 are helpful comments is because they used capital letter, full stops, different subjects in the comment put into two paragraphs and they are informative comments.

Writing Challenge

My sister and I was standing in the mist of cold snow. I saw a glowing light and headed towards it. I heard growling and knew that wolves were behind me but I kept walking forwards towards the light. Slowly, I made it to the light and it was a wooden cabin. I ran inside and started a fire in the fireplace hence the coldness. I went to sit on the couch in the room when I heard a growl. behind the couch was a wolf. My sister and i screamed loudly. “Ahhhhhhh!” The wolf whimpered and hid underneath the couch. Finally after My sister and I calmed down, we checked on the wolf to see what was happening and we noticed that it was as scared as we were of it. The wolf walked up to us and slowly but surely, it sat next to our legs. In shock we stood still but I went to pet the wolf, not scared of being attacked. The wolf was cautious but kind and licked my fingers.

I went to play with the wolf outside in the snow but my sister would not budge. She was terrified by the wolf. As she turned around to run away the wolf licked her hand. Her eyes softened and she bent down to pet the wolf. After a while we headed outside and played in the snow. Not all wolves are scary after all…

All about me!

Hi, my name is Caitlyn, here are a few things about me!

I am 10 years old and in year 6.

I have a dog and two brothers and I love, love, love, DANCING and skiing!!!!!!! 🤩

My favourite lessons at school are English and Chinese.

I love recess and lunch because I get to play with my friends and eat! 🥳

My favourite animals are dogs, pandas and wolves, my favourite foods are sushi and steak!🤤

 

 

Country Of Focus – China

China

China is in the continent Asia and China’s capital city is Beijing. China’s population is 1.398 billion which is many considering it’s a country. China’s native language is Mandarin, Cantonese, Hunanese, Min dialect, Gan dialect, Wu dialect, Kejia dialect and Hakka dialect. Renminbi is China’s currency and Australia is China’s sixth largest trading partner, as China will give some items that Australia uses and gives China something they need in return that can be only found is Australia.

Toilet paper is designed by China and China discovered tea which is a very common used drink. China is bordered by 14 countries: Russia and Mongolia are to the North, Vietnam, Laos and Thailand are to the South, India, Pakistan and Nepal are to the West, Beijing  and Shanghai are to the East of China.